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I loved it. I loved the title, I loved the overall themes of it, I just loved the whole honesty of it all. Great job. It's different and not one ...

Thank you so much everybody who reviewed this. It really means a lot to me to hear your opinions. I'll try working on the errors and everything and I really ...

Woah. I LOVEEDDDD the analogy. Waiting being taken out to play That part doesn't really make sense. Shouldn't it be "Waiting to be taken out to play"? Anyways, great poetry.

Wow! FINALLY!!!!!! I've been waiting so long for this novel to continue. I thought this was absolutely perfect, especially the way the plot's going. Great job. Thanks for posting this.

i LOVED it. I really liked the rhyming scheme and it definitely enhanced the quality of it. It had a story to tell and many could relate to it. Good ...