LittlePrincess

Wow! There are a lot of parts up. I probably won't get to them all today but I'd like to read them at some point. Something I meant to say ...

I clicked on this story because I liked the title but once I found out it was a Harry Potter story I got extremely excited! The beginning could be a ...

We just learned about this in history class! (I assume you mean suffrage in the title) I think your opening line could be more grabbing, its not bad now but ...

Hello Ultraviolet! Your title intrigued me, that was probably the point. So I just sat at the edge of the river where water sloshed on my boots and sand stuck ...

Hello! Here for a review! I think it was the rush of uncertainty about whether or not anyone would actually look for her that made her do it. So this ...

I love this, I really did. A lot of times rhyming poems sound sing-songy or forced but I thought this was perfect. My only real critique is that the shower ...

I'm learning about the 1930s in school now! Ok review... Living the life I live now, looking back on my life five years ago seems like a blur. Your first ...

Hi Pheonix! Littleprincess here for a review; and the junior high girls' table, a thin, pale, dark haired girl from my grade leaned against the wall. She doesn’t go to ...

I realize that you posted on my wall in January but this is my first time coming on since then.. so here I am. Better late then never! To be ...

This story is fantastic - as promised here I am for part 2. I like how you don't have quotation marks because it makes it seem more... in the story. ...

Onto part two.. My heart stops, then continues. You broke Timi's heart. I chuckle to myself and her head shoots up. This part confused me. Why did her heart just ...

I'd first like to say that I have never read a sci-fi story on YWS but I thought hey, why not? And that was a good decision because this was ...

I like the title. It intrigued me. Onto the review! You prologue could be worded better because it doesn't really hook the reader in so-to-speak. Its kind of like this ...

Wow, you are a really good writer! You're prose and characterization were great, no particular comments but I absolutely look forward to reading more. Send me your next chapter :)

I really enjoyed this! For one, it was so.. true like the raw truth but told so beautifully in its simplicity. Okay, maybe that didn't make any sense but there ...