LittlePrincess

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! It's a bit unclear as to what Ivy's disability is. Is it that she can't talk? I think you should make it ...

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! Your opening line could be a little more gripping. At this point it didn't really stand out for me and you want ...

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! A short thud filled across filled across doesn't really make sense. You could say spread across or just simply filled and you ...

Harry Potter! Yess! Smack, smack, smack... My feet pounded softly against the floor as I made my way, slouching, down the corridor. The pounding of the feet and the description ...

That was really great! I always secretly believed that Malfoy and Hermione belonged together. I mean, it's perfect and you executed it so well! I would like a tiny bit ...

"Remember I told today will be special?" Mary paused to let Sara nod; her head moving like Noddy's. This is probably not something you can help but it sounds a ...

Hey there! I picked this off of the Team Watchmen review list. Go Team! :) I've never really reviewed fantasy before but I'd love to give it a try. Since ...

Hey there. Little Princess here for a review! Since this begins in the future and then goes back to the present i'm not really sure if it counts as historical... ...

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! but Kamil had told her to be silent with that adult sense of urgency that she didn’t quite understand. That's a good ...

Hello! Little Princess, here for a review! I looked out of the window, the dark street outside was lighten only by a struggling lamp. Opening sentence is a little bland, ...

As a huge scary movie fan I am very excited to read this. So, here I go! "Would you like a cup of tea, Darling?" I asked my husband, Introduce ...

I tried to run despite the pain in my legs; I just wanted to get away. However, the more I ran the closer the footsteps got. There came a point ...

Hello! Little Princess here for a review! The beginning is great, I like how it jumps right into the action and I absolutely love the characterization of Danny. Already I'm ...

Hey there! Little Princess here for a review! «About me,» I said, listening to the words as they made their way out of my mouth, making the optimism they were ...

Hello! Little Princess here for a review; It was a hazy Tuesday afternoon in the middle of summer. A cool wind blew in off the water, carrying a tangy scent ...