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Re: Some people think theres docks in london..
Ok, I have one nitpick and one alone... What the heck?! You're 13 and writing words like that? I may be old fashioned... But I never dreamed a 13 year ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: Report on Sesame street [parody]
This is one of the funniest short-stories I have ever read! I agree with irishfire, I'm not sure how the 'N-bomb' or the F-word will fly here... I'm going to ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Runner Ch. 1 (revised)
Hi there! You are very talented and I love the plot and work in this chapter. I shall review this in blue. He found loosened bricks and secretly (discretely) pulled ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Pen to Paper
I love it! Just one thing I wanted to point out... Skipping through the songs like their (They're) nothing trying to turn into something You have great talent, keep up ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: deleted
WOW! You have some real talent! And at such a young age? I'm in shock! :o I shall review in Orange... They’re powerfully built with razor-sharp claws and are faster ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Makng it (For Love and Music #1)
Hi! this is my first review... I'll go easy on you as long as you go easy on me 8) Every thing is good! Keep writing, but remember to stay ...
Jan 11, 2010