Published February 19, 2010
2nd song. I know theres no docks in london i just didnt consider it when i wrote it.
It was a midsummers night in london city.
It was all lit up and looked very pretty
But down by docks thats what it wasnt
Thats when the fish were shown a dangerous entity
The fish were pissed and demanded equalality
They killed the fisherman with great brutality
They were pissed wiht our parliament
They wanted a fishman establishment
So the army got out there guns
Fuck man this is gunna be fun.
Fish man pissed
Cause we fish like shit
Real Man pissed
Cause fish be busting our dicks
They be busting our dickss (whoa whoa)
And we be fishing like a bitch
Who the fucks gunna end this shit?
Will it be us or will it be the fish?
And if the fiish catch you
Your lucky if you die
And try to run and they'll shoot
They cut you up into a pie.
So it was along 12 minutes the war was gone
Turns out we were right and the fish were wrong
Hahahaha fish people we won the war.
Well i guess its cause fish cant live out of water.
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PetRock, i am sorry you feel this way. But the song is supposed to be a humorous way of looking at overfishing. Now I'm not saying its a good thing because i am very against it. I wrote the song to up the awareness of it in a funny fashion. And in the modern society, in this day and age i believe people are bombarded with crudeness. It is everywhere in any form, from simple swearing to clever innuendo. I hope others like my song more then you did and I'm sorry you feel that way \:
Ok, I have one nitpick and one alone...
What the heck?! You're 13 and writing words like that?
I may be old fashioned...
But I never dreamed a 13 year old would even think of those words!
I think you should revise this, ALOT!
Way too many bad words. :\