LittleLionWomen

I agree with butterfinger, it's a great poem but the meaning is a bit hard to understand. I feel there's a very powerful meaning behind it all, maybe I'm not ...

Really great song, I would like to actually hear it. Your really good with word choice. One thing that might make this stronger would be a bit of rhyming. I'm ...

Wow this is really good! great word choice, fluency, everything! I'm not an expert, but I can tell you have a great talent and a lot of emotion in this ...

You have a real talent with sensory images. you really can paint a picture. Awesome job! Im not that great at critiquing people, because I have horrible grammar and spelling. ...

I really like this poem. It's very impressive. I also love the mystery to it. I love how everyone can take it in and interrupt it in different ways. Great ...

That was amazingly well written, sad, but amazing. I'm a beginner to all this posting my work online and reading others, but that's just so freaking amazing. Awesome job.

That was amazingly well written, sad, but amazing. I'm a beginner to all this posting my work online and reading others, but that's just so freaking amazing. Awesome job.