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Thank you so much! I will try and fix the form right away!

Thanks so much :D I've almost got the next chapter done, just got a little snag that I need to work out haha

Thank you so much!

I'm so glad you liked it! The mirror was supposed to be what he used to signal his men and its what Harmon noticed before the attack. I can see ...

Thank you very much! :D

Thank you! I'll try to clear some things up.

Thanks! I'm so glad you like it :D

Thank you :)

Thank you! I will try to give it some more umph when I edit :P

Thanks for the review! I'm so bad with typos :P

Thanks a bunch :)

Thank you, I see all of it so well in my head, it really helps to have someone point out what I haven't been clear about :P I will add ...

Thank you very much :) I will fix those areas up!

Thank you so much :) I may consider changing it ti a dry season rather than winter so that people don't get confused. So thanks again :D I really appreciate ...

Whoa, I never saw this review for some reason. When I saw you're review on chapter 5, I thought you skipped this one xD It was a pleasant surprise to ...