LittleCaroleen

Thank you! :)

Thank you. The tears thing wasn't supposed to happen. The second one was supposed to be fears. Oops. I'll go fix it. Yeah it is a little choppy and needs ...

Oh well, now that I read it, it's not exactly the same. Look it up though and you'll see what I mean. It's an interesting play. Unfortunately my dear, someone ...

I hope you know that the origin of this comes from a play by Stephen Gregg. I know this because I had to do the annoying chorus part that did ...

Adressing one part in the review: His mom is about 30 years old, which is why it's weird that she has pink streaks in her hair. She's supposed to be ...

Thank you for your time to read and review your story. The "its" mistake was automatically corrected (in-corrected, really) by my computer. I didn't realize it. The kisses expression, it ...

This is the first chapter. The beginning is the preface. The three c where supposed to be hearts and they represent a break in the chapter.

I liked it. It had a nice rhythm to it. Kind of like a lullaby that you wouldn't sing to your children.

Thank you. I did think it sounded off a bit, but I don't think much when writing. I write it down, and if it's pleasing to my ears then I'll ...

Thank you! I was rather careless when I posted this, and I simply put it on here as it was, because it was the last poem I had written. I ...