LittleBitCold

.... this was weird. I liked it! but it was weird. I think you probably need to make it a little more clear. What is 18 year old doing hanging ...

Yay!!! More Cher stuff I absolutely looooooooved this... when are you putting on more??!?! I don't really have any nitpicks, but i loved how Ares said all the stuff that ...

First of all, you completely flooded the whole genre with your edited chapters. That's a little annoying. And second, I don't really like this story. I've read most of the ...

WOW!!! This is proly the best story ever made!!! I like it much better then all your other offense to them.... I'm almost inspired to continue my vampire story... Anyway, ...

OH MY GOSH!!! I loved it...you neeeeed to write more. It's super crazy and weird and pointless but it reminds me of me a little, you know? Except im not ...

Wow. wow. wow. I almost dont have anything to say. Almost meaning that i do have SOMETHING. It was incredible. There, I said it. This might be me favorite thing ...

OMG!!!! You ended at the most exciting place eveveveeerrr!! I love the little baby...he is soooo cute and I love how I can't even tell what hes saying sometimes. reminds ...

Wow!! I really like this even though I didn't read the other chapters. The characters are really cool and I like the way you describe things. I don't know if ...

OH MY GOSH!! This was so exciting you cant stop yet!! Delys reminds me of a vampire I read about in another book. He liked to get people drunk and ...

Goddddd...that was crazy. I swear to the fact that I have NEVER read anything like it. Pleeeaasseee write more! I am absolutely dying to know what happens. I love how ...

Oh no! You didn't read the rules! You need to review TWO other stories before you post. Not doing so can get you kicked off. I suggest running off ASAP ...

Yes, I liked it. Yes, I am surprised. Yes, I want to read more. I only found two mistakes... I heard a crescendoing, “Come Innn.”, from behind the door. It ...

I liked it!!! I can't wait to hear what happens to Aslina!!! On the other hand, I have to agree with the above reviewer A LITTLE BIT. I read te ...

I am reviewing CHAPTER TWO - This was decidedly creepy. I think ya might need to let a little light in, these kids are SO SAD. Is there going to ...