Lissa

Wow...This is very, very nice. The tone seems so unfeeling and empty, which I personally think matches well with the main character. What intrigues me the most is that I ...

Nice. Very interesting idea you got here. A few suggestions: -You can build a lot more off of the characters. -Develop Krystal and Keith's relationship more. -Explain why the sleeping ...

Wow. I love this poem. This line is perfect. It makes everything seem so endless. "A mile of corn fields On the way to The end Of the world." This ...