Lingering_Shadow

Thank you. 'Cries' is a good suggestion. And actually it is with my life. Since the poem is referring to actual physical cuts I'm saying that each cut is 'stained' ...

Loved it. The rhythm was steady and it all flowed well. Though in the second stanza I think punctuation of some sorts might do nicely, it's a bit of a ...

Thank you very much. Though I actually hate putting poetry into a format, I think it takes away from it. (And sorry about the spelling mistake, I do that quite ...