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Re: deleted
Thank you. 'Cries' is a good suggestion. And actually it is with my life. Since the poem is referring to actual physical cuts I'm saying that each cut is 'stained' ...
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Re: Let Go
Loved it. The rhythm was steady and it all flowed well. Though in the second stanza I think punctuation of some sorts might do nicely, it's a bit of a ...
Jan 14, 2005 -
Re: 'Shades of Hypocricy'
Thank you very much. Though I actually hate putting poetry into a format, I think it takes away from it. (And sorry about the spelling mistake, I do that quite ...
Jan 14, 2005
