Lilyan

I adored this piece. It is vague but in a good way. The vagueness makes the story work. I really think it could be a short story in a woman's ...

This was so amazing and a great read. I really adored it. The way you made it, like, I can't explain. But your writing style reminded me of Those Who ...

I'm really new to critiquing however, I must say--with a bit of editing and taking all the suggestions of the others--I'm hooked. Really, I have a feeling of why she ...

I didn't watch the video. However, just from reading this I could tell right away your story was based off of 'Traveling Soldier' by the Dixie Chicks. I do have ...