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Yeah..I get that!!!>.

Yeah!!I know I didn't like that part too...'cause Colton very clearly spoke on how co-operative his parents were,although at first they didn't believe him..,but later as he kept stressing they ...

Nope..I actually watched the CD of the real person(Colton Burpo),I mean the boy who actually witnessed it...and found out a movie's been made on his yeah I didn't read it.

Surely gonna check that out buddy!!!!...:)

Yep!I've watched all those except for fireproof...I just saw that trailer but didn't watch the whole movie...;)

Love that..;)

"God's Not Dead" right?;)

Yeah..just completed that sentence bud.."God is good all the time" it's a song though....:p

"All the Time"..;)

Thank you RossLighting..:) Yeah,I tried my best to minimise the length..and I did cut a few lines too....maybe next time I'll try using a word limit. Thanks for your help.^_^

Hahaaa...XD...Looks like a masterpiece now...^_^:P

Thanks a lot verba4scriptor!!!:) Okay,I'll try changing the sentence..if it looks a bit complicated.^_^

Woah!!! It's looks much better now!!!....#Amazing!!! Hey,would you mind capitalising S' in the first sentence too...cause you want to drag the reader's attention to the central theme of the poem..i.e ...

Umm..did you edit your poem?:l

Awesome!:)