LilMissPanic

Thank you ^-^ I'll try my best, or perhaps I'll even revise this chapter and put the history in here at the begging?

Thanks you very much for the review, i'll be sure to go back and make changes! ^-^ as for why they were laughing at her, I kinda took the inspiration ...

You really think so?! :D Thank you that makes me happy to hear, I always thought I was mediocre > . < ^^;

Thank you!! Honestly I think when I was writing this I pulled a blank and just wrote the first thing that came to mind ^^; And you really think so?? ...

Thank you! ^-^ it was a story that randomly popped into my head so i'm glad you think it came out okay :] I'll work on the top paragraph and ...

Oh woopse haha thanks for pointing that out, and alright, I'll work on the first paragraph :]

Alexy is actually a boy ^^; haha but I ended up changing it to 10 years after i thought about it, I also decided to change it to fantasy but ...

I've actually been working on the first chapter to this all day, but im not even close to half way done ^^; I just thought this would be an interesting ...

From reading this Sage sounds like a pretty cool character, he reminds me of a lion! Reading this gave me a great idea for developing my characters further :]