Lightsong

Remind me to review this piece later.

Thanks for the review! Yeah, it's a country majorly inhabited by Muslims. :D I'll try to fix my wording and focus a bit on the settings. :)

Thanks for the review! Silent clap is like a slow clap; you make the gesture, but you don't produce the clapping sound. :)

Thanks for the review! Perhaps some lights are actually Silver/Scarlet/Sunglow; they are beings from another world. :)

Ohmegerd, reading dis. The feels! xD

Thanks for the review! I planned to, after several chapters, reveal bit by bit what happens to Azhar. He's the runner who has the light Flaxen, the one that doesn't ...

Azhar is mentioned in the earlier chapters. He's the guy Merah couldn't convince to join her due to his light disliking Scarlet. I don't want him to join them and ...

Hahaha, you're not the only one with the confusion. Merah does act boyish a bit. :p

Thanks for the review! Merah and Imran has limited time to be in Sarah's house since they should be back before seven to pray with the family; you can't really ...

Thanks for the review! :) Some things to clear up: - Yes, they all go home after the little meeting with Damon, and Imran knows this because he's Merah's brother. ...

Ooh, thanks for the review! :)

Ah, I think I should change the car door to being locked. I'm sure that's what I intend it to be. I want to make it Scarlet clan because there ...

Thanks for the review! I'll give your suggestions some thoughts in future drafts! :)

Thanks for the review! The part about the cashier has been told before hand when Sarah told them about her near-death situation, so yeah. :)

Thanks for the review! I'm embarrassed you reviewed my old works; I'm sure my recent ones are better for the eyes! :D