Lightsong

Oh. My. God. Remind me to review this.

You're welcome, Star. :D

Hmm? But you did put in there 'innocent black people'... which are basically innocent people, just more specific. Are you saying Kolfer was lying when she said that? Well, I ...

Thanks for the review! :D Well, about the checking on guys part. First, Merah can be easily distracted if she lets herself to check on guys, which is why she ...

Thanks for the review! CQC is explained, but poorly, I think. It's acronym for Close Quarter Combat. :p Ah, the terms are originally to be smartly produced, as in one ...

Thanks for the review! And oh my gosh, how did you find out about my novel? I'm so embarrassed. That thing needs polishing severely. >.>'''

Thanks for the review! As always, I agree with what you've said. I pretty much wrote the first thing that came to mind when I was writing this, so I'd ...

Thanks for the review! :D Damon's sudden argument is actually because he's been bottling it up while they're walking. He's too deep in thought to process what Merah has done ...

Thanks for the review! And oh my gosh, that suggestion is fab. I'm going to snatch it right away. :D The moment when I was writing Sarah's part, I didn't ...

Thanks for the review! Hmm, I might confuse myself with the siblings' age here. Maybe when they're young it's okay holding hands but not when they're teenagers. I think I'd ...

Hahaha, yeah, that's how our education system works for government school when we're in Primary One to Six and Form One to Five. I'd be looking forwards for more reviews! ...

Thanks for the review! :D Yeah, I think I better to work on the transition. Anyway, about the portal being inaccurate - it's like this. The lights can come here, ...

Duly noted! I'll keep in mind to include that scene for further drafts. :D

Thanks for the review! :D So, the Blue House member thingy is really a part of the school system in Malaysia. Basically, when you're having PE class, you'd wear a ...

Thanks for the review! Agree with what you said about the voice. I realized I didn't put much thoughts/feelings for Merah, and hopefully future chapters show improvement on that part! ...