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Re: The Monsters Inside My Head- Chapter 1
This was a nice story and it's only chapter 1!! Let me start with the title, it was really interesting and it hooked me to it. Then the style of ...
Jan 20, 2016 -
Re: The Daughter of a Fallen Angel
First things first: The title is amazing! "The Daughter of a Fallen Angel" has such a nice ring to it. Now for the characters, so far they seem pretty interesting! ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: Delete and Restart: Chapter 1
Wow, let me just say that this was such a powerful thing to read. I love the details and descriptions put into it. The title is also really interesting and ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: I. He's Back
This is such a great story/chapter! The title instantly hooked me. "He's Back" first thoughts that went to mind was who's back? My mind instantly jumped to it being foreshadowing. ...
Jan 14, 2016