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Re: Hopeless End
Hey thanks for stopping by! This is actually my first poem where I respect the the number of syllables per two lines, it was quite difficult because syllable counting whilst ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Hopeless End
Thanks for the review! Yes I do notice sometimes my rhymes are out of place, but it's my mistake most of the time because if it rhymes then it gets ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Hopeless End
Haha, pure genius is too much, this was actually inspired by the game I was playing plus my grief. It wasn't horror or supernatural to be honest, it just seemed ...
May 10, 2015 -
Re: Hopeless End
Thanks for the constructive critiscism, I wrote this a month ago when I was depressed, and I was affected by my emotion that I knew something was missing. Reviewing it ...
May 10, 2015 -
Re: A Viking Raid
Hillarious, made me actually reread the story about three times, a pretty good writing I must say.
May 9, 2015
