Light_Devil!

Hey, thanks guys. :D It's nice to see that this story touched someone. :) I feel a little bit sad when I read it, but its a good kind of ...

Hey Squidikle :D Hopefully, the rhyming doesn't sound too forced. It does a bit, but that can't be helped, considering the fact that you wrote this to rhyme. *Cuffs you ...

Feelings of love grow ice cold, < I think you should take out crystal, it reads better without it...> Logic freezing the mind, uncontrolled They shatter, the glad memories of ...

Awesome! Thanks for the review! And I thought it was a little too long, but I wasn't too sure. Thank you again! :D

Hey, thanks all for the reviews. :D Napalmerski - I thought that if I described the background/setting too much it would ruin the intertwining past and present. As in it ...

Haha, thanks. And its fine, :P, when I get in a bad mood I don't understand anything at all . And thank you again. :D

Thank you. :D

Thank you for your time! :D I think you are correct with the "are". I missed that, silly me. :) Heheh, I loved the "wit of an unlit wick" line ...

Thanks for the review. :D To anyone who reads this post, can you please tell me which you think is better from my piece?

:D Thank you both! I only just realised that you never knew where the girl was. Thank you for pointing that out. I tried to fix that up. Thank you ...

Hey, guys, I decided to write another chapter on this. I'll post it shortly. Keep an eye out for Unleashed, Chapter TWO: Click. Thank you for all your comments. That ...

Thanks Layla. :P

Ahhah, thanks Vasticity. I love Rorschach, pity how the movie ended though *shakes head sadly* :(. Wow, thank you Kaywiia. Those are wonderfully descriptive thoughts about my story! :) You ...

Thank you! I took the majority of your pointers, but I really liked the way the "stare" thing looked. :D Thanks for the help! :P

Thank you very much! *hugs* :) :lol: I always paused at the "slid" part and I would stare at it, but I never knew what was wrong with it. I ...