Light_Devil!

Hey there, I'm here, no need to fret. Ye GODS. I have avoided reviewing this for the longest amount of time merely because it just seemed so long and boring. ...

I read your first paragraph and I have never been so confused in my life. I literally had to leave my chair, lay down on my bed and contemplate my ...

Oh... This is what you've asked me to review? Well, I'm telling you outright, I'm not taking pity on this monstrosity you call a story. You've linked me to a ...

Hey, I'm here, no need to fret - all is well with the world. As well as it can be, at least. And now... to the part I enjoy the ...

Why hello there, I'm known as cruel to be kind, so don't expect anything other than straight to the point comments from me. Well then, we must go on with ...

Hey there, To be perfectly honest, no one is going to read these blocks of writing. First of all, split your story into chapters. Second of all, ensure you've selected ...

Hello there, it's nice to make your acquaintance. I'm Azrael and I'm a very harsh critic. Don't take anything I say here on in personally. Well, then - let's get ...

Why hello there. Just wow. I agree completely with Seemingly. There aren't any words I can say that would make this any better. You have a gift; a beautiful one. ...

Why Hello Thar. Azrael here to review your work. Let's begin! (By the way, I'm known as a cruel reviewer, so beware.) Chapter 1 Portal to a second world My ...

Why hello thar, I am Azrael and I shall be your reviewer today. *Bows* Let's begin! Prologue Darl, if you want to make this look more professional and less... shall ...

Finally, here I am. Number Dous of the Dynamic Duo. Here to serve. Pleasure to meet you. Let us start at once! The girl is inevitably scared. That has to ...

Here I am, finally. I don't have much to say, because a number of people have no doubt beat me to the punch line. Anyway, here I go. Sober Tony ...

Here I am, finally. I apologise for the extremely late review, but nonetheless I am here! Number Dous of the Dynamic Duo, here at last. A pleasure to make your ...

Good day, again! It's Azrael at your service on this fine evening as part of the regiment known famous as the Four Musketeers. Let's us begin this review! (And I ...

Why hello thar! My dear sister, Seemingly, informed me that your story was "great" and that I should get on with reviewing it, however, after reading this prologue it has ...