Liaya

Thank you so much! :)

Thanks once again for the suggestions! I'm looking over the poem again and I appreciate the review.

Thank you so much! That's really kind and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the suggestions and the review, Malachi! I'm working on extending the poem a bit and giving it a better ending.

Thanks for the suggestions and the review! I really appreciate it. I'll look into your suggestions.

Lol. I want to write more, don't worry! I'm just trying to figure it out. Thanks for the review!

All right, I agree with you about the ending. I'm still trying to figure out that part! Any suggestions you might have are welcome. What it says is "gray robes" ...

Lol. Yeah, when I saw that I'd named the ghost Malachi I thought you might find that funny. The poem was actually a required part of the assignment; build the ...

The rudeness is okay. It's part of what made reading this so fun!

Haha, I wouldn't mind you posting more! I thought it was fun.

Yup! Thanks for the review! I'll go take a look; I think I see what you mean. Thanks again!

Certainly! :)

Okay, thanks for your review and the suggestions! I'll consider what you said and try to find something that works. Thanks again!

Whisper is fourteen. I thought I'd mentioned that previously...I'll have to go back and check again. Her parents are actually over protective of her because of something that happened...but I ...

Much better :)