Liaya

haha yeah, I mean delete the poem

Thanks for your suggestions! They're great and very helpful! I might shorten the prologue, but I'm not sure about the length of the rest of the chapters being any less, ...

Thanks so much for your suggestions. You're right about the beginnings of my sentences...I'll take a look at that, and see about cutting out some of the less relevant details. ...

Thank you for your suggestions! They help a lot! :) Very appreciated!

Thanks for your feedback! This is just what I needed, and I'll consider all of your suggestions! :)

Thanks so much for your feedback! The poem was part of the assignment, but I'm thinking I'll just delete it. Your comments are very appreciated! :)

Okay, thanks for the suggestions. I'll try to make it make more sense!

Thanks so much for your comments! It does help, a lot. :)

Thanks so much for your review! This is really helpful!

Thanks for reading and giving me some feedback! I appreciate it a lot!

Thanks for your feedback! It's very helpful and I'll happily consider your suggestions. :)

Thank you so much! Your compliments mean a lot. I'm glad you liked it!

I'm really glad you could relate! I did write it from my heart. Thanks for reading it!

Thanks so much for your suggestions! It is helpful. I really appreciate the feedback!

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this, and I appreciate the feedback!