Liaya

Thanks so much for the review and the suggestions! Brady isn't someone most people (including Bryn) sees as shy, at least not generally--though he is. Problem is he scowls at ...

Haha, Whisper's dad came up with the idea. He's kind of an odd ball. He knows a lot about the mansion because he's on better terms with Anne's family than ...

I'm sorry, that is really frustrating! Grr...messy formatting is really a problem sometimes, isn't it?

Haha, this thing just doesn't want to work today. Anyway, great story.

Nicely done! You've got a great writing style. And the dream was effectively creepy--I loved your description of the ghoul. And you do a good job taking the audience along ...

You're fourteen, right? I was fifteen when I realized I actually had some talent with poems. Until then, I thought I sucked to high heaven, lol. Anyway, great job!

Okay, now add something like "I had no idea what going to England would truly mean" or something along those lines. That would be your hook, your foreshadow; it tells ...

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! It's cool it gave you a goosebumps moment, lol. If the categories didn't smash suspense and mystery together, I would have put it as ...

I added a bit to the top of the prologue in the hopes the rest would make more sense! I know it's not very interesting, but I'm still trying to ...

Yay, I'm glad you want to keep reading! I'm going to post the first chapter, but it might be a while, because it needs some major editing first! I'll let ...

I always center the name above the section when someone else takes over. Sound clear enough? (I do this in my Awake series, too)

I'll have to see about a better fishhook. Maybe I ought to put in a prologue after all, just a couple of paragraphs about the Counsel and Dream Doctors. Thanks ...

Haha, don't worry. Luke just hides his traits well. He actually views himself as stupid, so it's easier to see his talents when the story is written from Meg's point ...

Yes please! (By the way, your profile pic is epic!)

Pretty much, yeah. :) Don't worry. He's only called Illevial in the prologue! I guess I was the one getting confused there, sorry!