Liaya

I do the same thing! It's really good for a rough draft! :)

Thanks for your review! I read through it again and added a little bit and I'd love it if you could tell me if it helps.

Haha thanks for pointig that out! I went and fixed it! I really appreciate the review. :D

Haha thanks for pointig that out! I went and fixed it! I really appreciate the review. :D

Thanks for the review and the suggestions! I went in and added a little bit about how they're different, but I didn't want too much detail. If you don't mind ...

Haha sorry about that. I had originally planned on doing a proper review, so I clicked the button, and then realized I was too emotionally worn down to be critical. ...

Thanks for your comments! There is more to come, I promise. This was meant to be less a chapter ending and more a break in the chapter. (Basically I ended ...

Thank you so much for the review! The criticism really helps and I look forward to going over my book again with your suggestions at hand. However, there is one ...

Haha good point. I'll switch them out for "mucky" and "acrid." Thanks so much for your review!! :)

Thank you so much for reading it!!!!! (I really hope it let's me post my reply this time; it likes messing those up.) I'm working on the next chapter and ...

Thank you so much for your compliments and your suggestions. They're very helpful! :)

Thank you for your suggestions! They're very helpful. I'll consider them carefully!

Thank you very much!! Your comments are useful and you made me feel happy! Thank you for your review!

Haha, well, I'm not sure if it's any good but I've posted the seventh chapter!

Me too! :)