Liavel

I'm a Romance writer myself and I liked how you played this out. It's true that a lot of Romance topics in this section or on other cites forget what ...

This is ok for a short piece. I kind of felt overwhelmed by all your descriptions on how beautiful this place and people are. If this is supposed to be ...

Well I still liked this next chapter but I don't think that it was as well written as the first part. There are some grammar errors and spelling that you ...

I also thought that this was pretty good. I don't know if I'm getting into something that had more in the beginning but from what I have read your ease ...

As everyone else has said this piece is really well written. You are a good short story writer. I find most writers have a lot of trouble with short stories ...

Well first off I understand the trouble you might have with finding a title for your work. My titles usually don't come to me until I'm half way through a ...

I thought this was pretty good for your first time. I understand how it feels when you first start out. This is a little short to be a chapter, but ...

I agree with the previous post on this poem. I liked the way this piece flowed together for the most part. There were some points I wasn't too clear on. ...