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Re: The Pit: Descent
Great story! I thought you did very well setting a tone and maintaining it throughout the story. I was also impressed how much character development you managed in third person, ...
Jun 12, 2014
Great story! I thought you did very well setting a tone and maintaining it throughout the story. I was also impressed how much character development you managed in third person, ...
Jun 12, 2014
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