Lezuli

Thank you very much for your insight. I was not aware of the adverb thing and I'll keep that in mind for the next chapters!

Ah, I see. That makes sense! Thanks for clearing it up!

Thank you for all of this! I quite appreciate it. As for the second part, part of Val's personality is that he doesn't really understand human emotions. So he doesn't ...

Ah, I see. Sorry for misinterpreting, it makes much more sense now!

Thank you very much! I am thinking of creating another story with these guys after I finish writing what I'm currently working on. Though I may write other short stories ...

I'm so happy you're enjoying Val's journey! The good parts just getting started...(maniacal laughter). Anyway, I also quite appreciate all the things you pointed out since I noticed none of ...

Thank you for your review! I'm so pleased you liked it! Thank you for your suggestions as well, I'll try and add some more descriptions to their outfits!

Thank you very much for your review. I'm truly glad you liked it. Honestly, I noticed that discrepancy as well, and I'll try and make it a little more seamless.

Thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it. Thanks for pointing out my run-on sentences and the other things, I never would have noticed that on my own!

Thank you very much for this review! I went back and fixed what you pointed out(I didn't even notice the second one). I also added some more thought process when ...

I'm back for the third review of your story! And I must say, this is getting better with every chapter. I really loved the way the protagonist is aware of ...

I'm glad I could help! And as for the first suggestion, I mean that the way you first talk about it makes it seem like the boys and Blister are ...

Hello, I'm just going to write a quick review for you! I'm going to say some nitpicky things and other such things, but I'm not trying to be mean so ...

Thanks for your review, I'm very glad you liked it! Also, I was wondering if anyone was going to notice the similarities between Fen and the legend of Fenris Wolf. ...

Thank you as always! I apologize for the lack of information on grimms, but they are actually a creature out of mythology. They are large black dogs with glowing eyes ...