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LeutnantSchweinehund

LeutnantSchweinehund

  • Script » Realistic, Narrative Re: Messy life'

    Ah, I see. Well, full steam ahead then.

    Oct 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Ave Deus

    However, what you say about ancient poetry makes a whole lot of sense. Even in the Epic of Gilgamesh, there was plenty or repetition for the sake of memorization. In ...

    Oct 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Ave Deus

    This is one of my older works. I'd ignore this one. The epic poem I was referring to was "The Teal Knight." This one here is quite lacking in many ...

    Oct 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: At the Gates of Heaven

    If I were to remove the historical references, I would be left with a story which bears striking resemblance to some Biblical tales. The destruction of Antes is nothing more ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: At the Gates of Heaven

    Well, I still don't know if the Epic of James has anything to offer, polished or not, so I'll probably let it die. Trouble is, it was one of my ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: At the Gates of Heaven

    Perhaps the prophet will be accepted immediately and the story revolves only around the prophet developing rules and conversing with God. That, or one might write about the life of ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: At the Gates of Heaven

    I tried to write a few sonnets before, and I'd say they weren't awful by any means, but they weren't anything to write home about either. Tried to write a ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: At the Gates of Heaven

    Oh right, I forgot to thank you for the review. Thanks much.

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: At the Gates of Heaven

    I'm a downright awful poet. My poetry is even worse than my prose, so I don't know if I should do that, but I may try nonetheless. In any case, ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: At the Gates of Heaven

    Eh, screw it. I'm not coming back to this "story" anyway. But they say a writer is to write around 1,000 words a day, whether good or bad, so there's ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The Epic of James - The Birth of Law

    I suppose so. I tried to break them a tad more with my newest abomination, in which there is pretty much no conflict at all. Anyway, thanks much for the ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The Epic of James - The Birth of Law

    I have consciously attempted to break nearly every convention there is. There are no happy ends to my stories, the underdog does not win, and justice rarely finds a way ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The Epic of James - The Birth of Law

    Old threads, old beliefs. At this age especially, outlooks change and values drop like flies. At the moment, I've got far too many half-baked hobbies as it is, and I'm ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The Epic of James - The Birth of Law

    Which actions might those be?

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The Epic of James - The Birth of Law

    See, you misunderstand. This is not upsetting for me at all. I'd like to believe that truth is more important than its effects, and so I accept truth as it ...

    Sep 30, 2017


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