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I still think Alice in Wonderland is drup trip that someone took, but I like the way you put it with the symbols. I didn't find anything in the way ...

Okay, I have to admit: this sucks. Sorry, but it's the cold, hard truth. There's no description, little detail, and the facts are short. I can't imagine what this Tom's ...

Bonjour, mon ami. Interesting story. Here are some problems I found with it. Note: Additions and changes are in bold, and spelling changes are italisized. “You’re a sweetheart Jenny. I’m ...

Bonjour, mon ami. *bows* This story is intigueing, but could be a little better. I will read on because there is a promise of it improving, but you want to ...

I read The Sight and The Fell and I loved them. Clement-Davies is my favortie author along with MacHale and Cornelia Funke. I like the concept of anthropomorphic writing than ...

I loved the Pendragon series and they are books that I can read over and over and never get bored. The series has so many plot twists I don't think ...

I think when they say that Eragon meets a god is because Galbatorix has become so powerful he is like a god. I am currently reading Brisingr and I find ...

You’ll get used to it, trust me,” my mom encouragingly said , peering back at me with her orange hair dangling downwards. Switch the two words around. It sound weird ...

The blessed end-of-year bell rang through the hallways at Clover High School.Before the last echoes had faded out, Hardly noticable, but you need to put a space between School. and ...

I been meaning to review this story all day and this is the first open moment I got. Sorry in advance if I say stuff others have, but I am ...

Good short story. Very descriptive and I can see myself walking with her and feeling what she feels. The grammar was perfect from what I could see and you were ...

Besides, he reasoned with himself, I would've done the same thing had it been an actual battle. Thoughts are usually expressed in italics. You don't have to do it, but ...

“Chris, hurry up with that potion , lad . We have to go soon,” called Chris's wizard master , Kirin. He stirred it with his large spoon , Is the ...

Far, far, away, across a vast landscape of monsters and innocents, incredible dangers and even more incredible truths, spread like a worn and wise map across a table, lies the ...

We’ve been in the Christine House now for six hours now .” I would get rid of one of the 'now's and replace it with something else. Intresting story. I ...