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Re: Elegy for a Best Friend
I like it. I like the way it starts. Keep writing, keep flowing. You've got something special.
Nov 21, 2006 -
Re: Life
It seemes like you tried just a little to hard with the ryhming. I also agree with what emotion_less said, it sounds like a poem that you would see on ...
Oct 27, 2006 -
Re: Flying high
I really liked it. For a second it had me wondering what you were getting at until I got to the end. Nice Senario, i have a poem that I ...
Oct 26, 2006 -
Re: moon song
I like. I like. Nice ryhme scheme. It had a nice affect on drawing the reader in.
Oct 26, 2006 -
Re: November's Child
I think its really good. Keep writing. I like your style.
Oct 25, 2006