Leonheart

the poem was great. there were little bits which didn't flow at all, and felt really strange to read. i think Adam got the main one. perhaps losing the word ...

i wanted more from the end. it seemed that this had a lot of promise, but didn't furfil it in my eyes. and Claudette's changes don't make it perfect. i ...

damn confusing.... but damn good... the concept is superb, and it really makes you think. i worked out on 1 you were doing it in reverse, and it took me ...

ok, seeing as i was in the presentation as well, i know the distress this particular story caused. I'm not entirely sure the repetition works for me, it seems to ...

on the whole, i liked the poem, and liked the idea. its good to see some political stuff, and its good to see it being written fairly well it was ...

ok, i liked two main things. the concept behind this is good, it could have been excellent. and also, i like how the first verse uses "cute" words, like cooties ...

i enjoyed reading this. reading the original in cadmium's post, i could see the little differences he made, and they made a great deal of difference. losing some of the ...

It didn't really capture my attention like i feel poems should do, especially when working on a poem that discusses Loss. i found that it didn't seem to flow perfectly. ...