LeoPenrhythm

Thank you soooo much...yes now i get the things which seemed a bit odd to me...but i didn't get it then..now it is crystal clear...thanks:-)

Thank you so much:-) and a good poem as well of yours..will be reviewing it shortly....thanks a tonnn!!!!!!:-)

Thank you for your review:-) Actually the thing is i wrote it in the format of a-b-a-b-c-d-c-d-e-f-e-f-g-g as you can see from the rhyming pattern, but I don't know how ...

Thank you for your review:-) Actually the thing is i wrote it in the format of a-b-a-b-c-d-c-d-e-f-e-f-g-g as you can see from the rhyming pattern, but I don't know how ...

I am soooooo sorrrrryyyyy...I myself made a blunder in my review...you need a question mark actually after "Sleep where are you"...hehe...not a comma...I wonder if i was half asleep too ...

hey!! Thanks for your review...the theme of the poem is the beautiful essence of nature...and a longing for a peaceful world...

Thanks for sharing your comment....I would definitely work on it.....

Hey!!! thanks for your honest comment on my poem......With regard to the thing you mentioned of using paragraphs, which I would prefer to call stanzas, I wrote this poem in ...