LennonYoung

It's good so far. Your main character seems likeable and the situation could be interesting, but that all depends on how you go about executing your story. My main complaints ...

I enjoyed that - the dialogue in particular. I enjoyed the easy flow with which your characters spoke to each other. There are a few minor grammar issues, pointed out ...

That was really sweet! The innocence apparent in the lyrics reminds me of Taylor Swift and I could see this being a good country or acoustic song. You've probably captured ...