Lena.Wooldridge

Overall, I can really really really relate to, like, half the stuff that is in this. From the missing third grade to lying to your mom about breakfast. That aspect ...

Grammatical Errors This day, I was Sofira. This is not only an example of (I think it's figurative?) language. Also you don't need to include the comma. I'd switch it ...

many other figments of my imaginations Should be "figments of my imagination s " there were many other figments of my imaginations bustling to and fro, but they don't count ...

He was the type of lawyer who got stuck with all the cases that wouldn’t be won. I guess his gain is my loss. This doesn't make much sense, it's ...

Dear Underwater, I would suggest posting this in two parts, because it is much to long as it is. You see, for potential reviewers, the extreme length of this makes ...

Grammar :!: Here, there is incorrect use of the semi-colon. Today I am but a man; A man with a lifetime beneath his belt. :idea: When you are using a ...

Hahaha, what the heck? This made me laugh. Like so hard. Oh wows. This is....... Interesting. The chat speak is a little too much, and I doubt anyone will take ...

I was just skimming this, and this is the one thing I thought was strange: “What, you think Mom chose wrong? Perhaps you would like to rule the Gods!” Would ...

I'm sorry, but I have to agree with Prok here. It was so boring. You have to make your reader care about your character. As we don't know anything about ...

Hey Angel! Just want to remind you that you must do 3 reviews for every piece of art you post ;) Also, you may want to check the formatting on ...

I feel that this fable doesn't really teach a lesson. The ostrich's pride does not directly result in her being turned into a chicken. You could be more creative with ...

Heya! :!:In the following sentence, "fate" must be capitalized. was it some fool game fate was playing on her? :arrow: As "fate" is being used as a proper noun kind ...

First off, this is way way way too long. Formatting has a lot to do with whether or not your work will actually be read on this website. For example, ...

Hey! Grammar :arrow: There is improper use of the word "it's" in the first sentence ^^ petite hand wraps it’s fragile fingers around mind (I'm assuming that you meant "mine" ...

First off, the title. I really think you should change the name of your MC, because it looks like it would be "the Diary of Anagram", so everyone will think ...