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Re: The Book Man, Chapters 42-43 (Revised)
Oh and also the pairing Tirion/Morrow is called Morrion, don't let Blue tell you any different.
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapters 42-43 (Revised)
No! Spider Kitty is perfect! He's so cute!! His name is Katreus and he is scared in the dark and always got picked on because of this. You have to ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Country Boy: Chapter 2, part 2
Hey, how can you tell that the old guy doesn't have any hair if he's wearing a baseball cap?
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Summer
I've edited it now. Though I didn't put in all the commas. :P
Oct 9, 2011 -
Re: Inside In
Beautiful! I didn't find anything to criticize. Great work!
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: Doritos: The Finger-Licker
Great. Now I want Doritos. But I don't want Doritos. But I want Doritos... Do you get the idea? Aaaah!!! The agony!
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog - Rewritten!
There's really not much for me to review here anymore. All the nit-picking has happened already, I just wanted to tell you that I really liked this piece (*goes to ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Two halves of a mother
So I changed the few mistakes I had... I also took out a few of the "big words". I'm not sure how much better it is now. Is it still ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Two halves of a mother
Thanks so much for the reviews! I'll work on the things you mentioned and post a second draft. Soon. I hope. @Amnien: I have three nephews, two of them already ...
Feb 1, 2011