Leilani

Lover Mine by JR Ward

Thank you so much for all of your reviews ^-^ I really appreciate everyone's review and opening my eyes >>

i agree with u. i really didnt like this chapter at all and i was planning to revise the whole thing ^-^

this is cute but i saw some errors ^-^ and welcome to YWS :D

i like it ^-^ cant wait

maybe space the paragraph because it's all bunched up and it just makes it look like a huge long sentence. looking forward to the next ^-^

hmm well i love your story but it is kinda...rush maybe tone it down ^-^