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Re: No Title... A Work in Progress
I stepped out and the cold hit me like a cement wall. I looked up, the mirror was fogged over, but I could see my ivory skin, pale and red ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Clinging Onto Perfection
I could literally see what was going on in your writing, along with what the girl was thinking. I give it two thumbs up One for description, the other for ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: You Only Need Your Own Love
My goodness! Precious tears ran down my face when I read this. I loved the imagery. I was so into it. I also liked that you talked about the characters ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter One)
This was an amazing first chapter. As I was reading, I could clearly see everything you were saying. The sarcasm, and realness of the piece is evident. :D Great job!
Oct 18, 2008