Leahweird

Wow. Bad day for errors on my part. Some of those mistakes almost ruin the whole sentence. Thank you so much for finding those! You also caught some things I ...

:) Thank you for your lovely comments, and for catching those errors. That missing word is kind of important, isn't it? That's fixed now.

That's one of the great things about playing with mythology. There is no right version! Not even the Greeks stuck to one story.

Knowing what turned out well is just as important as hearing what didn't. Thank you for the ego boost!

You have made me very happy. It seems I have managed to get my point across even with just this one chapter. I think that means that the character I've ...

I think the danger of being repetitive come from the use of "my love" and "darling". Everything else seems fine, but these two phrases seem overused somehow. Otherwise this is ...

Critiques are important, but it's just as good to know when you've done something right, and hearing that is certainly better for your self esteem. :)

I forgot to say! I really enjoyed the story itself. Very mysterious and whimsical.

Thank you for the compliment. I don't know if this will be a book persay, we'll see how long it gets. I'm not sure if it has a meesage or ...

Thanks for cathing that typo! It should have been "years", I fixed that now. I'm so glad you're enjoying this. Hoefully I will have the next part up soon. I ...

I want to throw a nitpick in there. You use the word 'might' to describe both Ithirica and the three kingdoms to the east. Obviously an unimportant detail, but it ...

Thank you for your comments. It is true that these few early scenes are more about getting information out than actaully adding to the story. I have now reached the ...

Hey :) Yes I'm pretty proud of my villain. She's the best evil charater I've ever created (not that that's saying much). I honestly have no idea how long this ...

I so glad you enjoyed this so thouroughly! I'm tickled pink. I think you're right about the dialogue. I will endoevor to fix it.

Thank you again for catching my goofs. I am so bad at self editing. It's embarrassing. These seem particularly weird though... Anyways, I’m glad you enjoyed this. I will try ...