Leahweird

Victor made me laugh. "takes all the flavour out of the blood" *snicker* Werewoles FTW! I was just about to ask for more details about Esme, and then she gave ...

My pleasure! This is a common issue when working with fantasy genre, but definitely forge ahead for now. I want to read what happens next!

Oh! I get it now. Nevermind...

Yes, but he knows that they know specifically where he is. Since they haven't been so directly on his trail in a while, I was just wondering why he thought ...

Thank you so much for reading all the cahpters and catching so many errors. I am still plagued by the four demons of cammas, apostrophies, missing words, and duplicates. Plus ...

Never a bad thing to have good characters on standby. Things will probably even out as the story progresses.

So Iulia is the mother. I thought she might be. I love the dynamic between her and Coron. You've got some lovely conflict here.

Oh I definetly will :)

I think a lot of those issues are caused by the fact that this is an epilogue, so most people would already know who the characters are, but you're right ...

Sometimes it's better to just get things down. You can always go back to it later. I would just like to see him messing about in a garden or something ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! I can see what you mean about that sentence. I think I revised that paragraph so often the sense got lost. I think it's ...

Thanks for catching those errors, escpecially that missing line. The joke is ruined without it. Pacing is probably my biggest issue as a writer, I'm still trying to get better ...

Not to cause dissent or anything, but I'm a believer in leaving out descriptions of things unless they add to the story. The word "serpent" is pretty evocative, so we ...

Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments! I have fixed the errors mentioned, and tweaked some things to fix some of the issues. Hopefuly they will suffice until ...

He knew she was a girl. It was just weird for him because he didn't really think of her as having a gender. That's why she's so so unimpressed with ...