Leahweird

I don;t have anything constructive to say, I just wanted to tell you how much I liked this piece. It was something really unique, and I love how the reader ...

I love this version of the classic fairytale. I especially love that you managed to give it a believable and well-thought out happy ending. The origional story always bothered me ...

I do love a good story about weres! You even have different kinds of shapeshifter involved, I like that. However, I wan to say that I think you give away ...

I really love the sense of celebration this piece has, even though you bring up a lot of things that are not neccasarily good. I also like how you flow ...

Hey! I can see you posted this a while back, but I just wanted to say that I thought this was a really interesting piece. Yes it lacks purpose as ...

This is a really interesting piece, although I think using proper capitilization and paragraphing would make it a lot easier to read. Grammar is not the most important aspect of ...

This poem is really good. I don't ussually like poems that rhyme, esecially if the y are short, but you've actually made the rhyming an integral aspect of the flow. ...

Well the dream sequence was horrifying. I assume that's the point? Already you've got me deeply concerned about what will happen when "they" find her. One criticism I have, I ...

Okay, you have some major issues with typos that sometimes make this hard to read. Droped words and wrong pronouns and the like. I would go back and fix those ...

My, this is a haunting piece. I especially love the last line. "Breath for me." I especially loe how it seems to go back in time from the start of ...

As a fan of Rick Riordon, I am really enjoying this. The classics major in me is going to me nitpicky for a moment though. This is just an interesting ...

I really hate to cause dissent, but I was going to say I love the beggining. It sets the mood, and doubles as a twist when it turs out that ...

I don't think sanity has much use her, and I mean that in the very best of ways. I LOVE this poem. You had me hooked from the first line. ...

Well this is shaping up quite nicely. You handled the time skip really well. The section in italics (the diary entry) was kind of hard to read. I think you ...

This is really good, the set up for a very interesting story. I really liked the shift of Evelyn having nightly nightmares to suddenly waking up calmly and seeing the ...