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LawsonJ

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Early morning rides

    Its a good story, but I feel that the bond between human and horse isn't developed enough. The flying bit is excellent, but I think that more could be added. ...

    Sep 10, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Silent Chaos

    Its not bad at all, but I feel that your trying to describe something very dramatic, powerful and fast very slowly. For example, "A sudden force threw me off my ...

    Sep 10, 2009


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