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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The End of Us

    This piece is a bit too melodramatic to my taste, particularly the part where the character tells the boyfriend not to kill himself. So far nothing in the story suggested ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Glimpsing Infinity

    Hello, I have just read your text and wanted to share a few thoughts. Your language is very picturesque, and your characters make very interesting comparisons. You perfectly managed to ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Marvel at the Wonders

    Hello, I thought I may share some of my thoughts about your story. I appreaciate how original the idea of the story is, not in terms of having a brand ...

    Nov 17, 2015


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