Laurenlovely

Wow. O my. Well than. I don't know if I should like this. HOW CAN I LAUGH ABOUT THIS???!!!! But I um... I Like how it rhymes... I have listened ...

I like bubble tea too *^*

Thank you Rosette, I'm so happy you reviewed me!! Yah. He's a pretty scared doggy. I need to start making thing more believable, ay. Don't worry I'll work on it! ...

OMG IT'S WONDERFUL XDD well everyone else has already commented for the editing, so I'm just gonna make this a "GOOD JOB" comment. This.is.so.funny. I love the character, Fangirl? seriously? ...

woah, does anyone else see three messages from me saying the same thing? That's weird.

Also, the ending was made the way it was because it shows why Tiny always digs a hole by a tree and sleeps in it, it's kinda a backstory of ...

Also, the ending was made the way it was because it shows why Tiny always digs a hole by a tree and sleeps in it, it's kinda a backstory of ...

Also, the ending was made the way it was because it shows why Tiny always digs a hole by a tree and sleeps in it, it's kinda a backstory of ...

Ack! Thanks for helping me on this Kara...Yah I needed help. *^* I SHALL DO SOME EDITING NOW!! Oi I am so ashamed of myself for not doing better ): ...

It's ok, some people start writing and miss some mistakes, it's good if you read out loud to your self so you can catch everything, if you read it in ...

Thanks again Alice, I'm working hard on making these chapters as good as they can get! I just need some time... :) haha anyways I'll be workin on it! -Laurenlovely

Thank you so much, I'll try to add that in :3

BURNEY FANS GO

Thanks for the review Mea!! I'll try to fix the repeated "I's" problem. Every review helps a lot, so thank you for pointing out more, and I hope you liked ...

Thanks, BlueAfrica! Wow I had just replied to you on Stray part 1 to check out part 2 and here you are! I'm glad you liked my description of the ...