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Hey Cspr! You don't have any reviews yet! :O Let me fix that ;) Red will be nitpick edits. Blue will be comments. Love had taken in the gated cemetery, ...

Okay. I'm a complete failure and it took me years to get to this and I'm really sorry, Susie dear. But I'm hear now! So let's get to it! :D ...

Mmmm, more MGD :) It was deep and threatening and my tiny brain couldn’t comprehend at first where the noise came from. I don't like tiny here. It makes her ...

A little late, but better late than never, eh? :3 So let's get to it, then! I snapped my head to the left and sure enough, Riley was sitting on ...

Hey Christal! You can thank Snoink advertising your story on her wall for me being here ;) Also, I really liked this. :) ...changed since 9th grade, trying to find ...

Hey Pink! Your title has intrigued me, so I'm here for a review (oh, and I lost... if you don't understand, I promise you don't want to... ). He kicked ...

Hey Paul! So, I'm becoming a stalker of your work. I finished reading In Memoriam yesterday (though, haven't finished reviewing it quite yet) and frankly, you rock. ^_^ Anyways, on ...

Back as promised :) Now, while the seasons are slumbering, the other one is causing havoc. An old war has kept them hating each other. They think that if they ...

Haha, what an amusing story, Aspiring! This personification of Paul was entertaining, and I can't help but feel bad for the poor guy! Now, I have a few nitpicks ;) ...

Hey Octave! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest. :) Here's a thanks-for-entering review! I really liked the third person narrative, and how there are no direct character ...

Hey Wario! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! :) The cars whizzed by him, none slowly down. slowed ;) He grabbed it, but forgot he ...

Hey PaulClover! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a review! :) The cops who had done the deed breathed heavily, glad that their work was done but mortified ...

Hey Idraax! Thanks for entering my First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! :) "Take it," Seres paused, considering him This is Wolf speaking, but it looks like it's Seres ...

Hey Scarlette! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! This was all so hard for me to wrap my head around. There is obviously a lot ...

Hey Jash! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a review! :) It also crossed my mind that only ten years had gone by, Father, clothed, as ever simple ...