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Hey EAHailstone! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! I really enjoyed reading this! It’s cute, and Penelope has a fun voice that is entertaining to read. Great job! I ...

Hey Cailey! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! This chapter was pretty well written. I didn’t find any nitpick-y grammar mistakes or anything, so great job! Really, ...

Hey Silent! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest!! She picked her way along the beach, trying to hold down her rebellious hair. This was revenge for getting ...

Hey thatboy! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a quick review for entering! First off, I’d like to say this does an excellent job of setting ...

Hey Shinobi! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a review for entering! Nitpicks: Verlinae had already made it down the stairs and was shouting for Sithe ...

Hey Micki! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a quick review for entering! Nitpicks: “I know that. I'm not saying anything about fun and or games.” This sentence ...

Hey Knightly! This was so adorable! I love the way you wrote it switching between "he" and "she". The nameless characters allow it to be applied to any two people, ...

Hey there Gemini! For a beginning, as you say this is, it's quite a good one. Content-wise, I'm intrigued and compelled to read more which is always your aim when ...

Hey jackle! This was an interesting start to a story! Nice job of introducing Jason as a character, as well as the environment it seems he'll be spending a significant ...

Hey tgirly! Wow, this was very good! So sweet, so innocent! Ahh I could just go on and on about what I love about it, but that wouldn't be very ...

Hi Tanya! :3 Here to review! It doesn't matter how many times you post anything, I'm still coming by to review ;) Anyways, let's get on with it, shall we? ...

Ah, another MGD chapter. :D

Alright. I'm a major failure. But I'm here now! No more vacations to prevent me from stalking MGD and throwing all my nonsense into review form :3 First, some smaller ...

Hi Scarlet! :D I only have one grammer-y comment: I guess I should start when I was 12 years old. As a rule, any number under 100 should be written ...

MMMMGGGGDDDDD :D Oh, and hi. I'm going to review now. :) “You’re stalling,” Riley whispered. He says this, but there wasn't any indication that she had been stalling. Did she ...