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Re: Nefarious Purposes 1
Hey EAHailstone! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! I really enjoyed reading this! It’s cute, and Penelope has a fun voice that is entertaining to read. Great job! I ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Out of the Dark
Hey Cailey! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! This chapter was pretty well written. I didn’t find any nitpick-y grammar mistakes or anything, so great job! Really, ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Ice Ambassadors: Chapter 1 (Edits!)
Hey Silent! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest!! She picked her way along the beach, trying to hold down her rebellious hair. This was revenge for getting ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1 - The Man in Fine Attire
Hey thatboy! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a quick review for entering! First off, I’d like to say this does an excellent job of setting ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: The Beginners Book Of Spells and Magic, 7 and 1/2 edition
Hey Shinobi! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a review for entering! Nitpicks: Verlinae had already made it down the stairs and was shouting for Sithe ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter One
Hey Micki! Thanks for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here’s a quick review for entering! Nitpicks: “I know that. I'm not saying anything about fun and or games.” This sentence ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Warm Coffee Mornings
Hey Knightly! This was so adorable! I love the way you wrote it switching between "he" and "she". The nameless characters allow it to be applied to any two people, ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Day 1: Sanctuary
Hey there Gemini! For a beginning, as you say this is, it's quite a good one. Content-wise, I'm intrigued and compelled to read more which is always your aim when ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hey jackle! This was an interesting start to a story! Nice job of introducing Jason as a character, as well as the environment it seems he'll be spending a significant ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Falling Slowly
Hey tgirly! Wow, this was very good! So sweet, so innocent! Ahh I could just go on and on about what I love about it, but that wouldn't be very ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Possessing Maya
Hi Tanya! :3 Here to review! It doesn't matter how many times you post anything, I'm still coming by to review ;) Anyways, let's get on with it, shall we? ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog - 6 Rewritten
Ah, another MGD chapter. :D
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog 5 - Rewritten
Alright. I'm a major failure. But I'm here now! No more vacations to prevent me from stalking MGD and throwing all my nonsense into review form :3 First, some smaller ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Am I Perfect Yet? (1)
Hi Scarlet! :D I only have one grammer-y comment: I guess I should start when I was 12 years old. As a rule, any number under 100 should be written ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: My Guardian Dog 4 - Rewritten
MMMMGGGGDDDDD :D Oh, and hi. I'm going to review now. :) “You’re stalling,” Riley whispered. He says this, but there wasn't any indication that she had been stalling. Did she ...
May 23, 2011