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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Recount: Medieval Adventure Park

    Hi Dracula! Lauren here for a review~ While I don't know the nature of your assignment, I thoroughly enjoyed your recount here! I like the way you set it up ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Gray : Present Two

    Heya Mephisto! So sorry for taking so long to get back to this, but I'm way excited to see more of this from you! I love the introduction of a ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Gray : Past One

    Hi again! Lauren back for another review~ I totally dig getting a chance to see Gray and Fell from the beginning of their relationship. It's so different than I might ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Gray : Present One

    Omg you got a Rache review that's divine I'm so glad to follow her.

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: "Big Brother" - An Apocalyptic Mystery & Thriller

    Hey R2theR! Lauren here for a review~ A note before I begin: you'll probably see yourself getting a lot more reviews if you break it up by chapter. Six chapters ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Knife Edge Boogie - Chapter 1

    Hi CraigFrank! Lauren here for a review~ I really liked how this chapter was paced. Everything moved along nicely, without sacrificing much when it came to plot or character. It ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Re:Miniscence 1.2

    Hi Flite! Back again~ Oooh, the suspense is really building in this chapter. I like that despite the fact that Rin doesn't know anything about herself or what's going on, ...

    Jan 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Two

    Hey DeepCrystal! Here again~ This was definitely a solid second chapter. I like that you've stepped us right into what seems like it will be the action of the story ...

    Jan 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: Re:Miniscence 1.1

    Heya Flite! Here as requested :D I totally love the suspense at the end of this. Mystery girls coming back from the dead? Yes please! I'm really interested to see ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Art » Other, Realistic Re: My Melancholy

    Hi silverlady! I have to admit I'm totally a sucker for combining art and writing of any kind, but especially poetry. So I really enjoyed getting to see this! I ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: Burden

    Hi magpie! This is a very brave topic to choose to write about, especially with such an opinion on the subject. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. One

    Hi there, DeepCrystal! This was such a sweet chapter. I particularly liked the relationship between Ales and Kieran, and couldn't help but smile as we saw them interact. This chapter ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 2: The Spell

    Hi again Confused! Here for another review~ This was another lovely chapter! I enjoyed reading it very much, and your prose continues to be strong and on a whole well ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 1: Enemies We Were, What Are We Now?

    Hiya Confused! First things first, massive apologies; I adopted this novel ten thousand decades ago and am just now getting to reviewing it! D: I'm truly an awful adoptive novel ...

    Aug 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Seasons

    Okay, I am going to try to keep my utter flailing with feels and love and AUGH out of this and try to be helpful? Cause I have already flailed ...

    Jul 12, 2014


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