Lauren

Hi, borntoshop! :) I'll happily be your reviewer today. Authors note: Where it says ‘Billy Loves Rosa Caitlin Kate Peyton Elle.’ Its ment to have crosses through all the names ...

Good afternoon yourself, EllyMelly (well, actually it's evening now, here at least). I haven't seen you around before, so hi x] I'll comment as I read, nit-picking mostly, and then ...

Hello, Coffee_and_Karma. I must say, the title drew me in instantly. I hope the story lives up to it && I'm sure it will. Right, I'll comment as I read. ...

Evi, this is amazing! It had me on tenterhooks, wanting to know what had happened, any everything--the little details, the sensations--added to the tension, the wanting to know what had ...

Hi, silver :) I'll comment as I read, alrighty? Walking along the freeway is a tad demoralizing. Maybe impact would be better if you scrapped 'a tad'? Hundreds of cars ...

Hi there, muunilist10. And, to echo nevermore's words, welcome to YWS. :elephant: It was beautiful. Every inch of it, every line, every curve, button, screw, door, hatch, and latch, I ...

Hello, June! You are, along with Rosey, master of all things critique, so deserve lots in return. x] I'll comment as I read through and then conclude at the end. ...

Hi. With regards to it being so short, it really depends on the kind of short story you're writing. I noticed it said 'Regan' by the '1', so I'm guessing ...

Hello, Helpful McHelpfulpants! [[Your name is great, btw!]] Anyways, I'll critique as I read though and conclude at the end. When he returns from the kitchen, the light filtering in ...

Hi :D You reviewed my story, so I'm happily returning the favour. I'll comment as I read through and then conclude afterwards. David Furey woke to the clang of an ...

Hi :) This look v. interesting and so deserves, I think, one of my amateurish reviews. Wahey! Anyway, I'll comment as I read through, and then conclude at the end, ...

Hi :) What I'll do is I'll comment as I read through and then write a little summary at the end, okay? I felt a hot twinge of excitement as ...

Hi, Colleen. I distinctly remember your helpful crits and so have come to repay the favour! I'll comment as I read and then conclude below, okay? Shay looked down at ...

Hello! I don't think I've seen you around before, but I'm Lauren. I'll try to give as helpful an input as I can. x] I critique as I read and ...

Oh dear, I have been very neglectful of my reviewing, and so everyone beat me to the post... considerably. Loved it. So much adventure; impossible to tire of it. I ...