LauraMae

Thanks for your review Stella, I am very grateful :) I have to say, I'm glad you asked questions, because at least that means you want to know the answers ...

I have to disagree with you perdido, as I the 'soft' words he used and the leaf metaphor were used for a reason. Harsh sounds and words would ruin the ...

Thank you Priceless :) I really am shocked by the response this simple piece has received. I am really grateful, thanks people! :D

Thanks for all the replies guys, it means a lot! :)

Hey guys, thanks for all your advice! I think I will split it into paragraphs, I've never written flash fiction before so I don't really know all the techniques. :) ...