Young Writers Society

That's fair, it takes practice even for native speakers. Good luck, again, I did really like the main character I thought the sarcasm was really well done.

So by weird I mean that it's not the traditional English sentence structure, which isn't always a problem, in fact it can be helpful on occasion if you're trying to ...

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Hey-o. My name's Lana, you requested a review from me a good but ago--sorry to make you wait I know how stressful waiting for reviews can be. Anywho... Synopsis: I ...

Oh and because there was only one review for your piece, I didn't take the review points for this one because I don't want you to have to leave the ...

Hey, I'm Lana. You requested a review from me. You don't have any reviews on this, so I'm not going to tag this as a review so that it can ...

Thank you for sharing about your grandfather, it's nice to have that feeling validated a bit. It's been a few months now, but I needed to vent in poem form.

Sorry this is so long. It's does not reflect on how good I thought your piece was. I'm just wordy. Also sorry if some of my explanations are very elementary ...

It was a great review, and you're right about the jumping out the window scene, that section has always felt off to me. Thank you very much

I was right, longest review

Good point on "non-verbal" pardon me. Not ash grass: My point was that it wasn't clear to me in your description, so you may consider changing the way that the ...

Holy fudge I rambled, my review has a higher word count than your piece. That is not an insult, I really enjoyed your piece, I just feel bad for you ...