Young Writers Society

Hey I really like this for one. I'm gonna start with the first section: very good inspirational quote voice especially with the punchline at the end. I like that you ...

Hey-o So this poem is about a black hole it seems? The ceaseless inhalation, galaxies form around them, etc. I definitely like the first line, it's grabby, has a good ...

Hey-o, I'm confused but I think that's a good thing. So this is a story about depression I think or some sort of mental illness. It looks like you're going ...

hey-o First off: There's this guy who's telling the story of his lost love years later. Obviously you're sticking us with a lot of cliches: the "forbidden love," "I'm rich ...

Hey-o, Sorry if I'm walking in on the middle of your plot, but I think I grasp the basics. The daughter of a pastor? moves to this cultish town that ...